Thursday, April 30, 2020

Haiku and Tanka


For the past few weeks, I've been jotting haiku and tanka in my notebook before bed.  These are drafts that I might go back to someday and work on a bit more.  Mostly, I'm just trying to take notice of what is happening in my life right now. Writing helps me do that.



the stream along our walking path





the lake we love to visit




we walk hand-in-hand

on a path we know so well

yet always seems new





walking the shoreline

we navigate ebbs and flows—

our life together





a bench by the lake

dedicated to someone

I have never met

sitting in a place she loved—

I think we would have been friends





this uncertain spring

we begin to discover

the unfamiliar

in a life we once believed

would always be familiar


©Linda Kulp Trout





A big thank you to Elizabeth Steinglass for hosting today's Poetry Friday. 







11 comments:

  1. Beautiful. What a lovely way to end your day, capturing moments. I love line three of your first haiku...always new. That's so true! Although, I cannot explain how it happens.

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  2. Oh my, these are beautiful. What a lovely ritual for the end of your day. I think I am especially moved by the "we" which gives them all so much resonance.

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  3. Those last two, especially, are lovely. I also feel a kinship when I sit on a memorial bench somewhere...

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  4. Wonderful, Linda. Love the habit, love the results. The two tanka especially spoke to me. I think I may have to adopt a similar before bed ritual.

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  5. Your writing habit is one I would like to develop... seems I'm all over the place, but making my peace with that. Thanks for sharing these haiku/tanka pieces.

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  6. These are so poignant, Linda, captures a time we didn't know we would ever have. I love your thoughts, like about the bench, and that final one, "a life we once believed/would always be familiar" feels heartbreaking. I have lived years & had many good times, but I feel especially sad for my own children & grandchildren, facing those years you wrote about, of uncertainty. Beautiful capturing of our times. Thank you!

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  7. If you take the photo of the stream and placed it with the last tanka, you could have a lovely digital for my #NatureNurtures2020. Let me know if this is something you would like to try to create.

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  8. Lovely poems, Linda. They made me calmer reading them. The last one especially resonates.

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  9. The loving, curious spirit that comes through in these poems resonates with all of us readers. Thanks, Linda!

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  10. These are lovely. I started the year with a daily haiku practice. I've let it slide since my routines have been disrupted. You inspire me to get back to it.

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  11. These are really lovely, Linda. You have captured the simplicity of everyday moments in nature, in unexpected ways. And that's haiku/tanka in a nutshell. I find it hard to pick a favourite.

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