Several years ago, I lived across the street from a community pond. It was a popular rest
stop for geese. I would often wake up to
the sound of them honking their way to warmer climates. I loved watching them
fly over my house as I imagined the teamwork involved in such a long flight. The
memory of them inspired this tanka.
Fly south geese go— soon
the earth will be covered inice and snow—it’s time
to leave for warmer winds so
go—before winter begins.
-Linda Kulp Trout , all rights reserved.
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Very nice, Linda! I like the way you have the poem laid out--it reminds the reader of a vee of geese.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Diane. I hope I get to see a flock fly over this autumn!
DeleteWell done with your shape poem, Linda! Your line breaks add a wonderful dimension.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Michelle. It was a fun poem to write.
DeleteI enjoyed the urgency in this piece, Linda--and enjoyed the reminder that some very inexperienced kindergarteners successfully added geese to their lexicons with me this week!
ReplyDeleteLinda,
ReplyDeleteYour tanka was an enjoyable read with perfect rhythms and carefully selected words. The shape of it brought to mind a group of geese in flight soaring just under the gray-blue sky.
Cathy
Your geese poem is perfect, Linda! I can practically hear the honking. =)
ReplyDeleteYou captured the geese as if mid-flight!
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